Monday, 5 November 2012

Peer Evaluation (Group Work) 6

6. Jar Of Hearts - Christina Perri
 
  • Performance, narrative, music and visuals
Strengths:
  • Range of shots
  • Good use of effects without looking unprofessional
  • Fairly ok editing
  • Some effort made in terms of mise-en-scene
Weaknesses:
  • Continuity errors (180 degree line rule broken)
  • Boring narrative, appears to be little effort to be put into it
  • Repetitive use of content in shots
  • Only two locations
  • Lacks attention to detail, e.g Wollaton Hall in background, No Smoking signs, protagonist left neon bracelets on
  • Over dramatic acting could be seen as humourous- doesn't match a sad, slow song (they smile at inappropriate times)
Mark and level: 18 marks, mid level 2

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